In the holidays I went to my auntys and uncles house, we caught 3 fish. We went swimming and we saw dolphins and whales. It was fun, finally we went to the house to smoke the fish.
Kia ora Missiah-lee,my name is Mi'a from Oturu school and I really loved reading this. its very exciting to hear that you had heaps of fun.My favourite part was how you caught 3 fish and you had such yummy kai. One thing is to be more descriptive in your story's and keep up the good work. Did you get to touch the dolphin?
Kia ora Missiah-lee,my name is Mi'a from Oturu school and I really loved reading this. its very exciting to hear that you had heaps of fun.My favourite part was how you caught 3 fish and you had such yummy kai. One thing is to be more descriptive in your story's and keep up the good work. Did you get to touch the dolphin?
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